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If a star would fall down,
for everytime I think of you,
the sky would drown,
the love would be through.

Dark sights,
darker nights.
Seen the warning sign?
Walk down the line.
=)

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CrazyMai Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Writer
Beautiful ♥ I love how you created the atmosphere by the ellipses..
I felt a bit lonely while reading it...
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luka567 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you.. It does feels kind of that way I know =)
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