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Image size
3168x4752px 8.29 MB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 500D
Shutter Speed
1/512 second
Aperture
F/1.4
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jul 6, 2012, 2:19:50 PM
Lens
1-65535mm
Sensor Size
15mm
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactOkay, I'm going to start with the positives. First, what an awesome idea! To have flowers almost "shooting" towards you is a pretty cool idea that I have only seen done with elements (water, fire, etc). So props to you on that! Your vision was really good with this picture- by the title and the picture I could tell right away what you were trying to do.
The coloration was good too. Artists tend to try vibrant colors with moving pictures, but it often ends up being nothing more than a sun glare to the eyes. So nice choice with the simple color pallet.
However, there are some adjustments you could definitely give to this photo in order to make it more appealing. First, maybe try a different point of view/depth of field. It looks like you're facing them head on, horizontally. Experiment and maybe try taking this from a different angle. Maybe show it more vertically. Or even zoom out and try to capture them from a distance. You can really do a lot more here; just have fun experimenting and see what you think.
One other thing that needs tweaking would be the sharpness of the image. In full view, nothing specifically is being focused on. You need at least one point of focus in the picture; otherwise it is overall a little too blurry.
I hope this is helpful for you! It's a really creative picture, so don't be discouraged. With a little editing or more shooting I'm sure you can come up with something even better. Keep up the great work! ^^